Makan ki Upari mannzil pe ab koi nahin rehta

Hi friends this is a poem recited by Gulzar Saab at Viswa hindi kavi sammelan
Hope you all like it:

Makan ki upari manzil pe ab koi nahin rehta

Makan ki upari manzil pe aab koi nahin rehta
Woh kamre band hain kabse
jo 24 sidiyan untak pahunchti thi woh ab upar nahin jati
Makan ki upari manzil pe aab koi nahin rehta

Wahan kamroon main itna yaad hai mujko
Khiloone, ek purani tokri main bhar ke rakhe the
Bahut se toh uthane, fekhne, rakhne main churan ho gaye

Wahan ek balcony bhi thi
Jahan ek bayeth ka jhula latakta tha
Mera ek dost tha woh totha
woh roj aata tha usko hari mirch khilata tha
Usi ke samne ek chath thi jahan ek mor baitha aasama pe raat bhar mithe sitare chubta rehta tha-2

Mere bachoon ne who dekha nahin who niche ki manjil par rehta hain-2
Jahan par piano rakha hai purani parsi style ka frazer se kharida tha
Magar kuch basuri awaazain karta hai ke uski ritzs saari hil gaye hain ke suroon par doosre sur chad gaye hain

Usi manzil par ek pustaani baithak thi jahan purkhoon ki tasveerain latakti rehti theen-2
Main seedha karta retha tha hawa phir tedha kar jati

Bahu ko moochoon wale saare purkhe klisaye lagte the
Mere bachoon ne aakhair unhe kiloon se utara
Purane newspaper main unhe mehfooz karke rakh diya tha
Mera ek bhanja le jata hai filmoo main kabhi set par lagata hai
Kiraya milta hai unse-2

Meri ek manjil pe mere samne ek mehmaan khana hai
Mere poote kabhi America se aayain toh rukte hain
Alag size main aate hai who jitni baar aate hai
Khuda jaane wohi aate hain ya haar baar koi doosra /aur aata hai

woh ek kamra, joh peeche ki taraf se band hai
Jahan baati nahin jalti
Wahan ek rosary rakhi hai woh usse mehekta hai
Wahan woh daai rehti thi ke jisne teen bachoon ko bada karne main
apni umr de di thi-2
Mari toh maine dafnaya nahin mehfooz karke rakh diya usko

Ab uske baad ek doo sidhiyaan hai niche tayekhane main jaati hain-2
Jahan khamosi roshan hai, sukoon soya hua hai bas itni si pehloo main jagah rakhkar
Ki jab sidhiyoon se niche awoon toh usi ke pehlu main baloo pe sar rakhkar gale lag jawoon so jawoon

Makaan ke upri manzil per ab koi nahi rehta
Koi nahi rehta

POEM: BAS KUCH KAHA HAI

Readers and Readers, Let me tell u this is one of my poems that i have written expressing my own story but at last found it generalizing the very truth of most of the lives around us.........Hope u all can get the feel of it. Thanks in Advance

BAS KUCH KAHA HAI

Hum chale the saath sabke,

Apni kismet apne haath leke

Phir kuch hua aisa ke kismet hamari chala bin raftar ke,

Aur hum chal na paye auroon ki raftaar se

Jahan hum ruke rahe apni kismet main jaan bharne ko,

Auroon ke kadam badhe poore karne apne khwahisoon ko

Is kasmakas main samay beeta, zindagi badli,

Par hum ruke rahe zindagi bin suljhi

In uljhanoon main apne sapne khote rahe,

Par auroon ki zindagi main rang sajte rahe

Phir khayal aaya kyoun aur kab tak ladain apni kismet se,

Jab zindagi baan sakti hai bin kismatoon se

Ye soch chood diya humne apni kismet ko uske haal par,

Aur chale aage, bin kismet, apni nayi rah par

Chalte- 2 humne paya sapne apne dhundle pad chuke the,

Kuch the baki, baki sab kho chuke the

Jo baki the unme bhi na bachi thi zindagi, na hi thi koi umaang,

Jaise chahete hi na ho chalna hamare saang

Ye dekh humne apne sapne hi badal diye,

Jo the bin zindagi ke, unhe naye sapnoo se badal diye

Ab safar bhi naya tha, rah aur sapne bhi,

Aur hum chale,sochkar chal sakte hain hum akele bhi

Is akele safar main humne dekhe bhi kai anokhe raang,

Aur kiya zindagi ko rangeen bhi, jo pade the kab se berang

Sochne ko hum akele the,

Par kya hua, dastoor main phool hamare abhi hi khile the

Chalte-2 ab sochte hain, kaise hum ruk kar apne se hi ladte rahe,

Jab baar-2 ladke bhi khudse haarte rahe

Par is haar-jeet ne sikhaya bhi hamain zindagi ke naye andaaz,

Jo ab aa rahe hain kaam, jab nahin hai hamare koi saath

Saath ki baat karain toh, ye kahe sakte hain,

Zindagi main parchai bhi chood jati hai, auroon main kya dum

Phir bhi jab tak saath de koi,

Chalna chahiye saang, kyounki nahin janta koi, kab badal de zindagi apna raang

Rahoon main ab main unse bhi milta hoon,

Jo chood aaye the mujhe safar ke bhanwar main akela

Aur dekhta hoon unhe,

Phanse usi bhanwar main, usi haal main jo tha kabhi mera

Ye dekhkar ek aawaz aati hai, kyoun karain afsoos ya gum

Jab hum ekele nahin, jiski kismet na raha uske saang

Par hum jante hain ye bhi uthenge gir-2 phir sambhlenge,

Kuch apni kismet liye kuch bin kismet chalenge

Ab gum se jayda sukoon mehsus hota hai,

Doosroon se jayda khud pe yakeen hota hai

Sukoon is baat ka ke hum phir hain safar main,

Aur hain aage bhi, kitnoon se, jo the kabhi humse door miloon main

Ab fikr nahin hume ke kabhi sajegi kismet hamari phir se,

Kyounki lagta hai hum hain aur bhi sakth bin kismet ke

Lagta hai aur bhi acha jab sunte hain auroon ke sapne poore hone ki khusi,,

Sach jankar ke hum bhi hain sapne aur uske poore hone ke manzil par sahi

Safar ab chalega, har khwahisoon ke poore hone par khilega,

Poore khwahisoon par armaan bhi chadenge, jo phool the baki woh bhi khilenge

Kahain toh ye kisi ek ka safar ho sakta ha,

Par padhe koi apna sochkar toh puri zindagi samaj sakta hai

Ab bas baantne ko itna hi hai,

Sach kahain toh safar ab aage bhi hai

Chalo, tum bhi chalo hum bhi chalain,

Safar hai lamba khwahisain hain kai

Rakhna har kadam aise ke har kadam manzilon par padain

Aur tamanna toote bhi kabhi,toh yaad rakhna sapnoo ki aadat hai sahi.

- AMIR PATEL

i read a movie........

Hello Friends i am back to put my heart again, say very soon as per my standards. I am elated to express that with the advent of this new year i got a chance to taste the flavour of an overpowering recipe called 2 States!!! The Gourmet among Indian novelists Chetan Bhagat ,who had already patented some of the most demanded recipes has once again settled the urge of its fans with a sensational book called 2 States, a book as we all know which takes account on love marriages in India. I submit on the very base of the book that in India love marriages are not as simple as it is outside, India in 2010 still has issues on love marriages and when it includes concern from different communities it's like NEVER!! NOT AT ALL AND NO NO....But its very true that Love marriages do happen in India and also are successful. Let me explain on my perspective why, in India love marriages take a tricky track unlike a smooth one, outside India. People outside India leads a nuclear lifestyle where after a certain level the the upper generations in hierarchy care less about their subordinates. Decisions of either won't really affect each other. In India whether we lead a nuclear lifestyle or live in a combined family our ethics always keeps us around the real world of ours i.e. our families. Even if our heart speaks for someone we Indians often consider our families and like them to speak the same language not forcefully but in consent. That is the reason why we live in different communities and states still forecast a single community and state called India.

Lets come to the track i.e. from my whatsoever perspective to the common perspective of all.

That is the book is a Superhit and box office has accounted great collections. As i represent (Chennai)Tamilnadu, being my residence since last year i felt more connected with the book, as the brides hometown was chennai and whole chennai has been descried with no adulteration.

The Punch line of the Book says "THE STORY OF MY MARRIAGE", As we all know chetan has proved his ability in interlinking different dimensions into a single and has fed us with fictions in such a natural pattern that sometimes it seems very difficult, to part the natural and the imagination.But truth is that this inability in distinction gives us the craze to know the now very own person of ours through his books. In his bestseller Five Point Someone, which was based on true life events even though not of his own,has given a chance to all the college going youths and passed outs to relive the very important part of their respective lives in a more highlighted manner. But unlike the others, 2 states being a biographical account of the sequences that took place before he possibly would get married to a girl of his own choice describes his own story in a much instinctive way. I bet readers surely will take this as the story of their own. Hats off to Chetan.

On more important fact i want to disclose and i bet everyone do admit to that is, you cant put any books of Chetan aside until you finish it..........its like an adhesive which makes every reader stick to it till it says the end. I myself started to read it at 12:30 AM and read till 5 in the morning. When i woke up at 11:00 AM i resumed to complete it and finally done with a superb story at 5:00 pm.

The onset conflict between 3 Idiots camp and Chetan Bhagat which is characterized by not giving the required credit to Chetan as the film has most its contents being taken from the bestseller of Chetan, Five Point Someone. The Producer, Director and even Actor Aamir Khan of the movie 3 idiots has denied the very fact but i as a neutral person am saying that Chetan should have been given the required credit. I have read the book too have watched the film, and anyone who has both the sections on hand would surely come up with a verdict favoring Chetan. I from my very heart love Aamir as a person, as an actor. The immense creativity that he has shown through his films is impeccable but this episode has really given me a Shock that how can a creative person justify the credit not been given to another creative person.........

It's something that i don't want to ask Aamir rather i want him to understand the truth.

As my blog says i read a movie.........why so? The Answer has been given above that the book made me stick to it till it ends and its only very true with a superhit movie that binds people till it ends. Therefore i conclude 2 States to be a movie which can be read and i bet the experience would be no less than the experience of 70 MM.

Thanks C H E T AN B H A G A T...........

My first Blog....3 Jan 10 @ 9:46 PM

Its been more than 3 years i knew what a blog is and was keen since last year to start up with my own blog. Ultimately the time has come and here i am typing my 1st blog. May be i am taking too much time in doing things.......Surely i need to enhance my pace otherwise blogging would be stepping on to the 3rd generation and i would be brushing on the primordial version of blogging world.

As i started, was really confused about the contents for my 1st blog but ended my dilemma thinking its not some assignment which i have to deliver to my boss tomorrow rather its something

which has no boundaries, terms and conditions to abide and provides ample freedom to open ones heart to the whole world for whom his existence is still unknown.

Let me tell u all why i have chosen the name of my blog as "THE ULTIMATE DESTINATION", The true fact is that what i want to make is a station where i can meet people of all dimensions sharing comments that more or less give me a view of what others think and how they lead their life and its what i always aspire to know i.e. socializing with people.

In the ending part of my 1st blog i want to take some resolutions, which i want to abide for my life, that is to share my life with the world in a very unadulterated way and to take feedback from the other side as precious comments.

THANKS A TON.........REVEALING OPTION IS ON.......WILL BE BACK SOON.......